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Mana Pool page grammar

msyverw opened this issue ยท 2 comments

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I noticed an error on the mana pool page:

Tossing in some resources into a &1Mana Pool&0 will cause them to get infused with &4Mana&0, turning them into more powerful forms.
A few examples are &1Iron Ingots&0 or &1Mana Pearls&0.

The 'in' and 'into' are repetitive, and I assume that ender pearls are supposed to be listed instead of mana pearls, since throwing a mana pearl in does nothing (as far as I'm aware).

commented

I also just read the mana spreader entry, and page 5 has some issues as well. The first sentence should probably read: "The spreader only fires one burst at a time..." The 'only's are also kind of repetitive. Also, the second paragraph just talks about what was on the previous page (mana loss). That may be intentional, but seems odd the way it is right now. Finally, on page 6, the sentence about the pulse mana spreader should start with "In case better control..."

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