1)Under "Introduction", the page on other tool types has (with the hammer) which is redundant.

2)Under "Pits of Fire", the page on Firepit should remove (again) as usage of the firepit had not been mentioned prior to the page.

3)Under "Pits of Fire", the page on Grills & Pots should remove the words (take can) from the sentence to make it understandable and the apostrophe on (its) should be removed.

4)Under "Pottery", the (its) should not have an apostrophe on the Indicators page and (Clay Ingot Mold) should have their first letters capitalised to make them consistent with the other pages.

5)Under "Pottery", the page on the Saw Mold should replace (An Saw) with (A Saw).

6)Under "Pit Kilns", the (its) should not have an apostrophe.

7)Under "Ores, Metal, and Casting", remove the random coma at (surface,.)

8)Under "Ores, Metal, and Casting", the page on Casting should replace (Copper as one or more of its three ores) to (Copper, as it has 3 ore varieties) to make it easier to understand.

9)Under "Building Materials", the page on Mud Brick Blocks is missing a fullstop(.) and the page on Wattle and Daub should remove the (and) and replace it with (as well as).

10)Under "A Place to Sleep", the rotating Thatch Bed display is completely missing a few sides and has a hard border line in the middle.

11)Under "Size and Weight", the first page has a mis-spelling of weight.

12)Under "Size and Weight", the page on Overburdening should be rewritten/rearranged as (Devices that hold their contents when dropped, such as Barrels and Crucibles, turn from Very heavy to Huge when sealed. While Anvils are Huge by default.)

13)Under "Size and Weight", move the mention of horse overburdening at the end with (Affects Horses Too) instead. This is done to avoid conflict with the bottom border of the book and to cut the amount of text.