Writing Errors in the TFC Field Guide under "Advanced Mechanics" and its Chapters
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1)Under "Animal Husbandry", the page on familiarity indicator should reposition the word (Shift) to not cut off the S.
2)Under "Animal Husbandry", multiple pages on familiarity indicator have misaligned texts due to the difference with their text leading and font sizes.
3)Under "Animal Husbandry", some pages include baby animals in their model display instead of adult animals. These include goats, chickens, ducks and quails. Which makes them inconsistent with other displays as they portray adults. Also, due to this inconsistency they unintentionally grow within the display into adults. Which exacerbates their models to be comical in size.
4)Under "Anvils", the a should be (an) instead.
5)Under "Anvils", the pages on targets should add (to) into (In order [] do this) and should remove the duplicate fullstops at the end.
6)Under "Barrels", the sentence should change to (or by using Right Button on the block works too) as there is no need to repeat the mention of fluid containers again with the bucket.
7)Under "Barrels", the page on barrel tips are missing fullstops.
8)Under "Barrels", the page on item cooling should replace the word lower to (down) instead.
9)Under "Barrels", the page on dyeing should entirely cut out (,in a pot of water) as that's just not a thing you can do to get wood ash.
10)Under "Bread", the visuals for dough crafting recipe is missing.
11)Under "Charcoal Forge", the visualization for the forge does not render properly.
12)Under "Charcoal Pit", the page on charcoal piles is missing (to) in (The charcoal pile contains up [] 8 layers of Charcoal).
13)Under "Crops", the page on hoes has false information with the passage (They can also be used to create Path Blocks).
14)Under "Crops", the page on Beets should remove the a from (are) and the pages on pumpkins and melons should replace (if) with (and) instead.
15)Under "Crucible", remove the d in (an).
16)Under "Dairy Products", either (a food) should be removed or just remove (a) as it's redundant.
17)Under "Fertilizers", sylvite text has not been changed to (Potassium: 50).
18)Under "Fishing", replace and with (to) on the first page and on the page for how to use a fishing rod replace the word grab with (bite) instead as it's the more accurate term.
19)Under "Keeping Hydrated", a should be replaced with (an).
20)Under "Lamps and Candles", the page on processing olive oil has incorrect info like how you can make olive oil water in a barrel.
21)Under "Leather Making", the page on scraping is missing a fullstop.
22)Under "Panning", a should be replaced with (an).
23)Under "Preservation", the page on cooking should remove the word (even). Replace it to (them) and remove the apostrophe from (it's).
25)Under "Sandwiches", remove (not) from the passage.
26)Under "Scribing Table", the entire paragraph on the scribe table is positioned weirdly on the page by being at the bottom.
27)Under "Steel", the page on blue steel and red steel are missing (in a) in their last sentence.
28)Under "Steel", the page on blue steel and red steel should replace [able] with (capable) instead to make their sentence correct.