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Writing Errors in the TFC Field Guide under "Advanced Mechanics" and its Chapters

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1)Under "Animal Husbandry", the page on familiarity indicator should reposition the word (Shift) to not cut off the S.
Reposition Shift

2)Under "Animal Husbandry", multiple pages on familiarity indicator have misaligned texts due to the difference with their text leading and font sizes.
Text Leading and Font sizing issues 1
Text Leading and Font sizing issues 2

3)Under "Animal Husbandry", some pages include baby animals in their model display instead of adult animals. These include goats, chickens, ducks and quails. Which makes them inconsistent with other displays as they portray adults. Also, due to this inconsistency they unintentionally grow within the display into adults. Which exacerbates their models to be comical in size.
2022-09-13_11 41 49
2022-09-15_20 10 05
2022-09-14_01 19 04
2022-09-15_20 19 17
2022-09-14_01 18 48
2022-09-15_20 10 10
2022-09-13_11 43 03

4)Under "Anvils", the a should be (an) instead.
Anvil An

5)Under "Anvils", the pages on targets should add (to) into (In order [] do this) and should remove the duplicate fullstops at the end.
Anvil in order to do this

6)Under "Barrels", the sentence should change to (or by using Right Button on the block works too) as there is no need to repeat the mention of fluid containers again with the bucket.
Barrels fluid container change

7)Under "Barrels", the page on barrel tips are missing fullstops.
Barrel tips fullstop

8)Under "Barrels", the page on item cooling should replace the word lower to (down) instead.
Barrel lower to down

9)Under "Barrels", the page on dyeing should entirely cut out (,in a pot of water) as that's just not a thing you can do to get wood ash.
Barrel wood ash water

10)Under "Bread", the visuals for dough crafting recipe is missing.
Missing dough recipe

11)Under "Charcoal Forge", the visualization for the forge does not render properly.
Charcoal forge visual issue

12)Under "Charcoal Pit", the page on charcoal piles is missing (to) in (The charcoal pile contains up [] 8 layers of Charcoal).
Charcoal Pit up TO

13)Under "Crops", the page on hoes has false information with the passage (They can also be used to create Path Blocks).
Hoe false info

14)Under "Crops", the page on Beets should remove the a from (are) and the pages on pumpkins and melons should replace (if) with (and) instead.
Beets are
Pumpkin If
Melons If

15)Under "Crucible", remove the d in (an).
Crucible An

16)Under "Dairy Products", either (a food) should be removed or just remove (a) as it's redundant.
Milk food

17)Under "Fertilizers", sylvite text has not been changed to (Potassium: 50).
Sylvite Phosphorous

18)Under "Fishing", replace and with (to) on the first page and on the page for how to use a fishing rod replace the word grab with (bite) instead as it's the more accurate term.
TO cast
fish bite

19)Under "Keeping Hydrated", a should be replaced with (an).
Hydration an area

20)Under "Lamps and Candles", the page on processing olive oil has incorrect info like how you can make olive oil water in a barrel.
Olive Oil Water

21)Under "Leather Making", the page on scraping is missing a fullstop.
Leather Scrap fullstop

22)Under "Panning", a should be replaced with (an).
Panning an

23)Under "Preservation", the page on cooking should remove the word (even). Replace it to (them) and remove the apostrophe from (it's).
Cooking issues

25)Under "Sandwiches", remove (not) from the passage.
Sandwich Rotten

26)Under "Scribing Table", the entire paragraph on the scribe table is positioned weirdly on the page by being at the bottom.
Scribe Table paragraph

27)Under "Steel", the page on blue steel and red steel are missing (in a) in their last sentence.
Steel in a 1
Steel in a 2

28)Under "Steel", the page on blue steel and red steel should replace [able] with (capable) instead to make their sentence correct.
Steel Capable 1
Steel Capable 2

29)Under "Support Beams", the page is missing a fullstop.
Beams fullstop