Divine Journey 2

Divine Journey 2

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Another Loading Screen Tip

Realities5806 opened this issue ยท 3 comments

commented

Location:
Loading screen tips

Exact fix:
"Much different from Divine Journey 1, unique recipes, unique progression, and more things to do" should be replaced with something like "This pack is much different than Divine Journey 1 with: unique recipes, (distinctive) progression, and more things to do!"

(You can replace "distinctive" with any other synonym for "unique" or keep it if you like it.)

commented

I think the original tip is grammatically correct and understandable.

commented

It's missing a subject

commented

It is understandable, but it is lacking a subject.