Grammar issues in Quest book
DavidMetcalfe opened this issue ยท 3 comments
Quest under Just Breathe. would read better if it were as follows:
"Oxygen. Something that's taken for granted on Earth. But while you're on the moon, you're going to need lots of it. Fill your 2 extra Oxygen tanks up just in case!"
Quest under Power up! would read better if it were as follows:
"When you were a child, your dad used to tell you about how he and his dad built a station on the moon. Something he used to mention was that he used stars to power the base?"