Galactic Science

Galactic Science

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Grammar issues in Quest book

DavidMetcalfe opened this issue ยท 3 comments

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2015-08-02_09 14 36

Quest under Just Breathe. would read better if it were as follows:

"Oxygen. Something that's taken for granted on Earth. But while you're on the moon, you're going to need lots of it. Fill your 2 extra Oxygen tanks up just in case!"

2015-08-02_09 20 10

Quest under Power up! would read better if it were as follows:

"When you were a child, your dad used to tell you about how he and his dad built a station on the moon. Something he used to mention was that he used stars to power the base?"

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Both issues are contained within Chapter 1.

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2015-08-02_15 45 18

Chapter 1, Title: Thirsty for more?

"Time seems to be much slower here, but still you're going to need to drink no matter how slow time is going."

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2015-08-02_16 28 12

Chapter 1, Title: Getting Even Hotter!

"By putting stone in a furnace, you can get lava. Something tells us that having lava will prove useful later on."